WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK OF MY COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY?

lol are you kidding me. It seems to me like this essay is basically an excuse for you not trying very hard and then doing awful. Then after that you talk about how you are better than everyone and even though a lot of people have a GPA 4 times higher than yours you still consider yourself just as smart as them. Then finally we come to the part where you practically beg to let you in so you can miraculously change due to a better environment and be a genius. Well that is what it looks like to me. Honestly what you need to do is get over yourself because there are plenty of people in your situation and none of them do so bad. A lot of them who try even get 4.0 or higher. One more thing is I noticed how you talk about how you have one of the greatest math minds of our generation but then you talk about how you are only in geometry when you are in 9th grade? this makes no sense there are kids at my school who are in Algebra II or Pre-calc by this time.